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    tile grave

    just about to tile the bathroom and thought i might try a capture, comments?

    [IMG]http://**********/tile_grave.jpg[/IMG]

    todd

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    Re: tile grave

    I think I'd prefer to see a little more depth of focus, as the cross merges with the background near the top. Also, if you centered the cross between the cracks, I think I'd like that better.

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    Re: tile grave

    I agree, a little more DOF and definedness of the cross and you have a great shot. Also, it might be interesting to make this black and white and crank the contrast, I think you'd get a nice affect.

    Nice shooting Todd, you've got some great shots,

    Jared

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    Re: tile grave

    Dear Todd,

    Hehehe!! I like. Very humorous too. As was mentioned, the cross does merge a tad with the background. It might be nice, as well, if the top of the spacer were in line with the vanishing point of the two lines. It would create a kind of formal "cemetary" type feel. I like the whimsical nature of this one. ;) Nice one.

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