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The bear on the left is not as transparent as the other two, but, yes, it does need more light. I completely neglected that I could use a reflector, so thank you very much, that will help future shots.
I think it's kind of static. or hmm. don't know how to explain it. very 'setup' looking. The bears are almost an exact distance from each other, the beer is in the middle, just under the middle bear. You see what I mean? For this to work, I think it would've needed a bit of a story line. different kind of composition. Like if two bears were together, an the other bear was lonely on one side with the beer. lol.
hope that helped
Liban
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I think it's kind of static. or hmm. don't know how to explain it. very 'setup' looking. The bears are almost an exact distance from each other, the beer is in the middle, just under the middle bear. You see what I mean? For this to work, I think it would've needed a bit of a story line. different kind of composition. Like if two bears were together, an the other bear was lonely on one side with the beer. lol.
Awesome stuff. I'd like to see this with even more lights, or more reflectors as well to throw more specularity in the reflections. The second one is my preferred, the shine on the left hip is very cool. Could be a bit more light on the bottle