Threatened

[Young Shooter]

these are good friends of mine and we were just trying different shots and this one just stood out from all the others so i edited a little and ps
comments please

[amithi]

I really like this, I don't know why. I'm a beginner, so I can't give you any tips, but it caught my eye I liked it immediately. That's important isn't it?

[jar_e]

YS,

Interesting shot. The tones are good and definately some great black and white. Though I like the potential for this shot, I don't know how I feel about cropping off the two standing girls heads off. With the crop you have now, the lips in the top right don't work for me and are too distracting. Including the the cell phone (?) in the bottom is a great touch though.

Good shot, just a few nitpicks,

Jared

[Young Shooter]

Thanks alot for the comments
i just wish i could get others to comment on my pictures also
thanks anywayz

[ChowChi-Ching]

You know, I have been looking at this picture trying to figure out what I think is throwing it for me.......I like the picture alot, I love the concept but, I am with Jared on the two standing girls heads and then I thought that maybe if you the girls looking at eachother? Giving a feeling of being left out, or the standing girls looking down towards the sitting girl, giving the 'threatened' feeling your title describes. I like the tones and the feeling of the picture alot. I also like the cell phone. Nice Job!

[Young Shooter]

Thanks chow for the comments
i do also enjoy the phone alot in the corner
i will improve on this nextime

You know, I have been looking at this picture trying to figure out what I think is throwing it for me.......I like the picture alot, I love the concept but, I am with Jared on the two standing girls heads and then I thought that maybe if you the girls looking at eachother? Giving a feeling of being left out, or the standing girls looking down towards the sitting girl, giving the 'threatened' feeling your title describes. I like the tones and the feeling of the picture alot. I also like the cell phone. Nice Job!

[readingr]

YS,

This I like a lot, The only thing putting me off a little is the girl on the left, it would have been good to get her lips in the photo to balance the girl on the right. However this is a nit pic.

Good shot.

Roger