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I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
However you did it, especially from the distance you were from the subjects, you eliminated the shadows from their faces as they are wearing hats. Colors are great, you seem to have the exposier right on. The distance between them is kinda disconcerting but not terribly. Nice expressions, good story here.
Personally i think the expression of left lassie justifies the distance between them...(i'm guessing that is why you placed her there)... But i agree with Frog, that probably a little crop from the right would give it more of an "on purpose" feel....
I like the colors, expressions and everything else really....
Nice shot!
Marc
Marc
"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing left to add, but rather, when there is nothing left to take away." - Antoine de St-Exupery
Kindly do NOT edit my photos - I would rather try and apply your advice and learn...
Hi Tom,
There are many interesting elements in this shot. The differences between the subjects on the right and on the left (expression, colour of the socks..) lead the viewers to study the photo more thoroughtly. The crisp colours also make the shot very refreshing. Nice job!
yoyo
I agree with the comments about the expression of the "sister"on the left and her distance from the other two. fits well and effectively. I too think the overall crop is a bit tight, but that is the only thing I might change to further improve this already very good image.
Thanks so much to everyone for your comments on this shot. I too like the distance between the grumpy old lady on the left. Maybe the others are a bit fed up with her.
I agree it is a bit tight though.
Tom
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
The details, colors and repetition of their outfits - all add interest to the image. I, too, wish there was a little more space on the left but cropping the right wouldn't necessarily solve the problem. A simple clone job using the small amount of bench and surroundings around her to add a smidgen on the left side might do the trick...
Ever since I saw this image (which I like very much with the caveat already expressed about the crop) I have been wondering what national costume that is?
Thanks Tuna and Mike
The clothing is that of the Naxi; ethnic minority tribe in south western China. The shot was taken (made LOL) in the town of Lijiang in Yunnan Province earlier this year.
Tom
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan