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    Thanks for critique

    Up early this morn, wife to hospital for CT scan.
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    Back home try some cloning. What say you?
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    Re: Thanks for critique

    I think you need a ND grad filter to bring up the foreground. It's to dark. The thing about beautiful sunrises and sets is to find something interesting to put under them..
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    Re: Thanks for critique

    Agree with greg on foreground detail. I think you've also put way too much of the foreground in the image, for these sorts of sky scenes only a small amount of foreground is needed and if you want the silhouette effect, the silhouette should be clearly defined, as is the trees show us very little detail.

    The texture in the clouds looks a bit too sharp in the last one..
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    Re: Thanks for critique

    Wonderful clouds

    agree that the foreground needs more light, simpler with a graduated filter, also doable adjusting the light in post processing but can be complicated to do it right

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    Re: Thanks for critique

    The second is my favorite, because the tree is the only thing sticking up into the sky. A power pole with a transformer is just . . . . ugly.

    I would crop the bottom, removing the roads that go across the picture. Then the foreground wouldn't really matter, it's just silhouettes against the sky, and the sky becomes the subject.

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    Re: Thanks for critique

    Thank you ALL, I had already decided "too much foreground"
    Yep the " power pole with a transformer is just . . . . ugly."
    If I had not thought I could clone them out I would have not stopped
    to take the pic.
    I don't think I can get a filter for my Sony.???
    Thank you again for your opinions.
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