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Thread: Templates

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    Senior Member Jimmy B's Avatar
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    Templates

    This was taken with my p&s last year. I liked the light contrast with the shapes of the templates.
    Not all my pics are looking out from a dark area to bright,honest.
    Nascar fans will know what the templates are for.
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    Re: Templates

    It doesn't appeal to my personal taste but I like how your eye caught those lines, shapes, contrasts.

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    Re: Templates

    I think you should turn it verticle and crop out the shadow area on the left.

    Jim B.
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    Re: Templates

    if you crop that part out you loose the cool shading and some of the idea of the picture. Its not really my taste but i see where its comming from.

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    Re: Templates

    I tried turning it, but it REALLY messed with my head. Maybe it is the concept that my mind knows they are on the ground and not hanging up. The other objects would really be out of place when turned. Thanks for the input one JB too another.

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    Re: Templates

    Hi! I think you have something good here, it just needs a little fine tuning. The shapes and textures on the floor are very interesting and seem appropriately colored for the scene. I would suggest making a crop to eliminate the pavement, which will leave you with a much more abstract looking image. Forgive me but I took the liberty of marking out where I would crop this if it were mine just as an example.
    Good idea! Keep shooting! :thumbsup:
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