Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 10 of 10

Thread: The Tardis

  1. #1
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Wiltshire UK
    Posts
    87

    The Tardis

    A quiet road straddles the ancient English counties of Wiltshire and Berkshire.The winding road from Hungerford to Burbage has many surprises with beautiful views of valleys, Norman churches and villages brimming with thatched cottages. You can glimpse a rare windmill from here and watch birds of prey swoop down on their victims. Then on a sharp right bend a turning signposted 'Wexcombe' and once again the road narrows and climbs. Half a mile onwards you are on a country road with views on both sides. As you climb something catches your eye - travelling in a car you may just miss it - and it takes a few seconds to grasp what you may have seen. Did I really see that ?.........

    Stop the car and reverse.......a round redbrick building in the middle of..of....well....nowhere ! Placed a few yards from the road and situated next to a track or path that meanders in the direction of...who knows where.

    For years now we have passed this curious structure and allowed our imaginations to wander...... a storage place for something ...home for a hermit... a time machine perhaps ? Thank goodness my basic but trusty Minolta DiMage X20 was with me the other day...I feel that this architectural curiosity may in the future simply...disappear! UUUuuuummmm !
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails The Tardis-waterplace.jpg  
    Last edited by Dave L; 05-05-2004 at 12:25 PM.

  2. #2
    Ex-Modster Old Timer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    KY, USA
    Posts
    16,848

    Nice colors

    Your image does make one stop and think just what the purpose of this structure is and why it stand there guarding a road to no where. Very nice colors and tonal range. I like the way the road leads you down and out of the image but the overall photo seems a little out of balance some how. I am not sure that the foreground puddles add much to the overall composition. I would try a bottom and a right side crop and just to see what it might do. Overall a very fine photo.

  3. #3
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    May 2004
    Location
    Essex, VT
    Posts
    28
    I like the image, but the fact that the building leans to the right a little really bothers me. I quickly straightened it in PS, then cropped the right side and a little bit of the sky and was much more satisfied with the image. (sorry I didn't save it.)

    Play around with it some. It's got some really appealing elements!

  4. #4
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Wiltshire UK
    Posts
    87
    Appreciate the comments. For those eager to have a close up of this peculiar building.....take a closer look....and it stills leans...like the tower of Pisa....
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails The Tardis-tardis1.jpg  

  5. #5
    Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    florida
    Posts
    420
    i dont know about this picture everything is good in the photographer point of view but honstly i feel the picture is empty... sorry for the neg comment
    ~Something is nothing~
    ~Nothing is somthing~

  6. #6
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Wiltshire UK
    Posts
    87
    All comments welcome positive or negative...that's the idea of this forum...so please no need to apologize. Many thanks

  7. #7
    They call me Andy... ACArmstrong's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Tennessee
    Posts
    470

    I like the second one...

    ...you're right - it makes you think about what it's used for. I hope you don't mind, but I played around a bit with it in PS. I felt like it might tell a different story if it were a little less sunny and a little more bleak outside.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails The Tardis-brick.jpg  
    Andy Armstrong
    Please visit my photography site - Andy Armstrong Photography

  8. #8
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Wiltshire UK
    Posts
    87
    I like that - could the photo been shot in B&W ? give it more....atmosphere ?

  9. #9
    They call me Andy... ACArmstrong's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Tennessee
    Posts
    470
    B&W on a cloudy overcast day would be a great story teller - I might even take a range of shots from a standing position all the way down to the ground. The little house against the grey clouds, shot from a low angle would look ominous, maybe even foreboding.

    I really do like this subject. It's interesting.
    Andy Armstrong
    Please visit my photography site - Andy Armstrong Photography

  10. #10
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Wiltshire UK
    Posts
    87
    I agree - I find this type of pic interesting and not at all 'empty'. Here is a great piece of old architecture in the middle of the english countryside. We frequently drive passed this and see folks stop to admire it - its somewhat out of place where it is. I understand from a friend that it is an ornate entrance to a water reservoir.... if so, makes it a more interesting subject...who would have known this ? why was it so ornately contructed ? how do you access the reservoir ? I think any pic of this location would fire the imagination ....as you suggest B&W during stormy weather would be very good.

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •