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They look very soft to me as well. On the first, the sky looks like it was really spectacular. The mountain range seems to be too low to give it the impact it deserves. Maybe a little more foreground. But I'm not sure. Again, since the mountain range is so small, I don't know if more foreground would help. But I like how you composed the shot, with the bottom point of the triangle centered then moving outward. I like triangles and you have a great array here.
On the second, the trees are more in keeping with what I was talking about above. If the picture was sharper, I think the textures of the clouds would have been more visible. The only detractor then would have been the power lines on the left (to me anyway). And maybe capturing the light a few minutes earlier would have been stronger, with more of the golds and pinks in the sky. Just a thought.