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    Sunset in Jamaica

    Sat on the beach in Jamaica in January.....was lucky enough to see this lovely sunset - I am sure the picture does not do it much justice !!!


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    Re: Sunset in Jamaica

    Nice shot Just a couple little things I would change. First, your horizon looks a little crooked and second, I would crop out some of the water to move the horizon out of the middle of the frame and crop in from the left to put more emphasis on the boat. Beautiful shot though and well done for shooting straight into the sun.
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    Re: Sunset in Jamaica

    More like this ??


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    Re: Sunset in Jamaica

    I hope you don't mind me doing this but, I here's a quick crop of how I might have done it. If there is one thing I have learned here though, everyone has a different way of looking at things and you should follow your heart on which direction to take

    PS- If you want me to take down the edit of your image, please let me know and I will take it right down.
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    Re: Sunset in Jamaica

    Not at all - I love what you have done with it !!!

    Thanks - definately food for thought.....

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