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    Sunset in the Fort

    Taken with the new Sony DSC-W100
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    Re: Sunset in the Fort

    BlackMtnMan - I like the color of the sky and the cloud. The moon is nice too, though too small. But there seems to be too much negative space (blank space) in the shot. I sort of expected to see a fort here from the title - does that title mean that you shot from the fort? Also: It seems here that the trees and possibly the moon are a little on the soft side. This time of day, the light might be too low for very effective hand-holding of the camera. Best to use a tripod. -GB
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    Re: Sunset in the Fort

    Pretty colors but the photo is a liitle empty. It needs a foreground.

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    Re: Sunset in the Fort

    Actually the Fort is the city of Fort Collins.....AKA Fort Fun to over 30,000 CSU students


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    I took your critiques to heart, cropped it down, moved the moon and made it bigger. I like the result...a lot...took out the empty space...but it's on my 'puter at work......I'll post the changes Monday.
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