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    Sunset on buildings

    I took this off the top of a mulit story car park, what do you think?
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    Re: Sunset on buildings

    This is not bad, CallumW. I like the deep orange tones and the strong silhouettes. I think you can crop a bit from the bottom to reduce some of the empty black area and also crop out the tall building on the right as I do not think it needs to be included. Some more interesting cloud formations could have made this a bit more impactful, but you still have a very nice looking photo here.
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    Re: Sunset on buildings

    Croping from the bottom is a good idea as it would remove a lot of area without detail. I also think that if you had waited just a few more minutes till the sun had begun to enter the crack between the two buildings that would also make a good image.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Sunset on buildings

    I have to agree that it would of been better if you had waited a few more minutes. But it is a good photo.
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    Re: Sunset on buildings

    Nice sunset shot, especially for shooting straight into the sun I agree with Gary's suggestion of cropping the bottom and the building. I might also crop out some of the blank sky on the top.
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