The Sun Is Setting - A question

[JFischer]

Howdy,

Last picture I'll post today.. Promise.. Sorry! :blush2: I love this image, or at least the concept of it, but there's just something not quite right... I'm not sure whether it's out of focus slightly (or not in focus at the right point!) or whether it's just badly composed but.. I've made efforts to try and correct it too, through cropping.

If it'd come out right, this is an image I'd love to have blown up. But like I say.. Just doesn't seem right somehow! Here's the original, followed by two attempts to 'add something' to the image through cropping.

Let me know what you think, if you could.. I'd value some expert opinions. And apologies again for posting yet another image! :blush2:

J