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    Supermodels (with Tuna In Mind)

    I thought of adding this to Tunas Divas but decided I might be highjacking his thread a bit.
    Anyway here it is.. Does not compare with Tunas B/W qualities but otherwise what do you think? I'll be away now for the best part of two weeks
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    Re: Supermodels (with Tuna In Mind)

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    I thought of adding this to Tunas Divas but decided I might be highjacking his thread a bit.
    Anyway here it is.. Does not compare with Tunas B/W qualities but otherwise what do you think? I'll be away now for the best part of two weeks
    Tom
    I think I'd liek to see the mannequins better -- they almost look too human at this distance. It seem like maybe if you cut the photo in half fromt he left it would work better. As for comparison to TUna, his B&W shoes a little more range and contrast, I think.

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    Re: Supermodels (with Tuna In Mind)

    Pretty cool, Tom. I like it - but I think you can crop this image a little tighter removing the motorcycle and other stuff along the edges - leaving just clone-faced models, some sidewalk and the sign above them. A little better focus and better impact.

    But still a well seen and captured scene. With Seb also commenting that he now has an urge to do some window dressing shots, have I started a trend? If so, this one is a fine example to start with...

    Nice job.

    Tuna

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    Re: Supermodels (with Tuna In Mind)

    Cool idea, but too far away. I'll look for your other postings of this subject that are closer.
    GB

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    Re: Supermodels (with Tuna In Mind)

    Tom, a good subject and not a bad delivery. As stated already, zeroing in on the mannequins and eliminating some of the other stuff would simplify and strengthen this image.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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