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    Suches, GA at night

    Please C&C, my first night shot.

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    Re: Suches, GA at night

    Interesting shot. I would have liked to see the same type pop as the road sign in the white and yellow road lines. Also the pole on the right side is distracting and wants to pull my eye out of the frame, I would clone it out. Too bad the road didn't curve before it goes behind the trees.
    Nice shot.

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    Re: Suches, GA at night

    I like it you might tweak the white balance to the cool side. Nice shot.
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    Re: Suches, GA at night

    Thanks for the suggestions.

    How's this? I changed the white balance a bit, lightened up the trees, and cropped out the pole.

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    Re: Suches, GA at night

    I like the second edit a little more you still might clone the jet some, maybe make it look like a shooting star. I looks like backwoods Ga to me. Nice....
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    Re: Suches, GA at night

    It has a nice simplicity about it: the straight highway lines and vanishing point, the sign with a curve drawn on it, stars... I don't like that tree on the right side. I would also brighten it up a little, seems a bit dark. Nice first night shot.

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