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Looks a little tilted to me and this time I think you overdid the grainyness (is that a word?). Still, it is almost always interesting to look at strangers interacting and this composition is interesting.
Don I think this is an excellent composition. It's got a great mood to it and you got a great moment. Sort of the completion of a deal (done behind that closed door) or an offer of sympathy is what I read in their handshake and body language..
I do feel though that there is a bit too much grain. I don't think it's all down to the dirty windows.
One of your best I feel.
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