Street Car Mural

[Don Schaeffer]

[Addies Granddaddy]

Too much going on at the level you're shooting from, Don. This is very busy, and I think if you want to get the mural you need to shoot from up closer. JMHO
John

[Greg McCary]

Nice work Don. It is hard to tell where the murial starts and the street ends. I think you should try a crop at the top and maybe some off to the right. But it is good as is.

[Frog]

I like the business. If it hadn't been tittled, I would not notice the mural at first and then would wonder if my eyes were playing tricks on me.

[Greg McCary]

Don you might try a desaturation level to get the "real world" to match the picture. Just a thought.

[Herriot]

I like the idea but I don't think that the position from where this shot has been taken is quite right, perhaps getting in closer would have helped? I like Greg's idea so hope you get a chance to revisit this scene

[Don Schaeffer]

Thankks guys. I pass this scene nearly every day. I wanted to show the wholeness of the parking lot, mural and surrounding buildings. Itlooks like a kind of fishbowl to me.