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    Stream


    Took this on my walk to the park today. Any comments/critiques?

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    Re: Stream

    The DOF looks cool but I think that the picture feels a little to cluttered.

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    Re: Stream

    Quote Originally Posted by CameraSpeak
    The DOF looks cool but I think that the picture feels a little to cluttered.
    Thanks for your input.

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    Re: Stream

    You can tell it's a nice place, but there doesn't seem to be any particular subject in the photo. This is sometimes OK... the entire scene can be the subject, but still having trouble w/ this one. The out of focus area at the bottom is distracting but I do like the out of focus background.

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    Re: Stream

    Tried a different crop, removing most of the out of focus area at the bottom.


    I also had an idea with this same place, if I go back, but place a little army dude or lego person in the stream to use as the subject.

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