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    Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    new version,,,racking it up a notch
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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Don - would be great background for something... perhaps a model shoot? The sky doesn't get much better ..............

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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Don - would be great background for something... perhaps a model shoot? The sky doesn't get much better ..............

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    I agree...That sky pulls me in like a vortex. Fantastic heavenly display. :thumbsup:









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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Thanks guys. It is hard to really capture the mood of a storm cloud.

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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    i .like the new version as well,very mysterious ,yet you maintained color on the fences,good job.

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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Thanks pbd

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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Nice Don. Another element would help, a car going by or something but that's an awesome sky....
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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Don I like this version. The clouds seem almost furious. The colors you have left at the bottom, even though it is a fence, out of the corner of my eye suggest, warmth, shelter, stability. Now the nit pick. If you are going to do selective color treatments you have to be very careful about your edges. You have some grey eating up into your fence color which is making me a little twitchy. I would definitely fix that. Other than that I really like this and think it is a wonderful example of how imagination can always win out over the limitations of one's equipment.
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    Re: Stormy in the Burbs (new version)

    Thanks CL. Not always, but thanks for the comment.

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