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Hi, alik: I looked, and because I appreciate the honest opinions on this forum, I, too, have to be honest and say that this one doesn't appeal to me -- and I don't know why. I like the concept, and it does have some interesting components such as the corner treatment, arched windows, and top piece, and compositionally, I think you did well. I think it is the colors that I don't care for -- of the structure and the sky. I looked at your gallery and you have some really nice ones! -- this one would be my least favorite in your gallery. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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The concept is sound, maybe if you had put the corner of the bell tower in the center instead of off center, in order to bring two sides of the tower into the shot it would work better. And like Paula said, the color is off a bit.