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You have the lighting pretty spot on I think - enough to give the tomatoes dimensionality, but not so much that there is a risk of burning anything out. I like the reflections and the water droplets. The black colour suits it too. I do think though that you need to clone out the lines where the wall meets the table - they are a little distracting. There is one drop on the table too which could go.
awesome work jacky. i wish that big stem wasn't bridging the three tomatoes. there's also a weird non-separation between 1&2 (from left) where 1 almost looks flattish and merging with 2. other than that. it's a very nice capture.
Liban
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