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    Still Life. (Please crtique).

    Sony alpha-100
    F/18, 2.5 seconds, ISO 100, light box + Post production.

    Thanks.
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    Re: Still Life. (Please crtique).

    I'm trying really hard to find something negative to say as there aren't supposed to be any perfect pictures.
    The top of the pen looks a little soft but I wouldn't think it would at f/18.
    The lighting is just great. Maybe a little more space at the bottom?

    Really nice stuff.
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    Re: Still Life. (Please crtique).

    The colors are really nice. The cufflink seems a bit cramped against the bottom. I personally think the composition would work just a bit better with more on the bottom (just a bit) and a little less black on the top. the blackness seems to be on the verge of overwhelming the picture....

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    Re: Still Life. (Please crtique).

    Thinking the same as Daq, a little more room on the bottom, and possibly they left side. Also seems a little dark, but that might just be my monitor.

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