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    Steaming Jacuzzi Silhouette

    Experimental. A unique situation created by a fern palm tree, rising steam,hot tub lighting at night.
    I included the different perspective images to show the conditions.
    I think it's unique to say the least...Your thoughts ?
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    Re: Steaming Jacuzzi Silhouette

    In some pics it looks kinda like the northern lights.....

    But yeah, 2 and 4 are great, 1 is good, and 3 is kinda... Well, the pole kinda kills it as the main subject. but thats just my opinion.

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    Re: Steaming Jacuzzi Silhouette

    Thanks ~ Image 3 was added to show the steam.The focus is on # 2.
    I only added image 1 for a comparo.' And #4 {of course} is the setting.
    I appreciate the feedback.
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    Re: Steaming Jacuzzi Silhouette

    I like your ferns in the second image and agree with the Northern Lights comment, would perhaps go for a slightly tighter crop, Not so sure about the pole.....

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    Re: Steaming Jacuzzi Silhouette

    I really like #2, The lighting is great. I also like the way you placed the ferns at an angle. Nice picture...
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    Re: Steaming Jacuzzi Silhouette

    I also like # 2. The colors in the background are quite different than anything I've ever seen. The shot of the hot tub is sorta snapshot-ish, just not great composition and no real subject (you need to get the party crowd in there to spice it up).
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