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I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
This is pretty neat, Tom. I like the whole idea here and I think you have something to begin this theme with. My only suggestion or concern is I think seeing a slightly more defined outline of the driver and perhaps a little more definition into what it is that she sees or is stalking. This could be the start of a mysterious series, if you so wished to pursue it as such
I like the balance of light orbs in the windshield as placed against the masses of dark being the rear view mirror, driver and dashboard.
Overall, the entire image has a good feel and pleasing way about it, even if ever so mysterious.
Gary, Greg and Dray
Thank you so much for the comments. I took a few of this type but this was the best of a poor lot. The conditions were almost totally dark and of course everything hand held, so poor quality to begin with. My hope was to turn the poor quality to advantage and hopefully produce an atmosphere; something with dirty mood and menace rather than a technically good image.
I'm glad it seems to be working in that way for you.
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
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