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I see what you are at here Seb but for me anyway that blob of light (heaven?) at the top is a distraction. I would tone it down a bit.
Looking at it again its the actual shape of the blob that puts me off more than its brightness.Otherwise it's great.
Tom
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
For the records, the title of the pictures partly comes from the luminous hole in the roof but it also have to do with the upper left corner of the picture...