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    Re: The Stairs

    Great compostion, but I would really like to see the origional image. This looks too much like a drawing to me.

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    Re: The Stairs

    Love it. Great lines and minimalist subject. The person is in the perfect place on the stairs.
    Only thing I wish was different is the washed out upper left.
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    Re: The Stairs

    Stunning, the figure on the stairs really helps this scene and the bold shape contrasts well against the finer details of the bannisters and narrow lines throughout the scene. Can you post the original just to see how far this came?

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    Re: The Stairs

    I am interested to know Guillermo when your work was shot? Everything you've posted has been -- to my eye -- very professional, but somehow, not taken recently.

    This particular shot of the stairs reminds me of black and white pictures that I took back in the 60s. Perhaps you just have a "retro" style.

    At any rate, I am enjoying your work and, this is no exception. Keep 'em coming!

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    Lovely!! Beautiful! Simple! Awesome! love it.
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    Re: The Stairs

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Love it. Great lines and minimalist subject. The person is in the perfect place on the stairs.
    Totally agree, this is a seriously great shot :thumbsup:

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Only thing I wish was different is the washed out upper left.
    Totally disagree in my mind this is an exemplary use of tonal range. If there was no light area at the top, it would cause serious compositional problems with the darkness at the bottom.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PRB
    I am interested to know Guillermo when your work was shot? Everything you've posted has been -- to my eye -- very professional, but somehow, not taken recently.

    This particular shot of the stairs reminds me of black and white pictures that I took back in the 60s. Perhaps you just have a "retro" style.

    At any rate, I am enjoying your work and, this is no exception. Keep 'em coming!

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    I believe what we are seeing is that Guillermo shoots with film. It appears that this is suddenly a retro thing to do and his finishing style seems to enhance that effect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jetrim
    Totally agree, this is a seriously great shot :thumbsup:


    Totally disagree in my mind this is an exemplary use of tonal range. If there was no light area at the top, it would cause serious compositional problems with the darkness at the bottom.
    I also wonder if monitor differences will cause that area to appear washed out. I have a laptop that is not regularly calibrated and that area does appear too light but on my calibrated desktop monitor those areas show good grain and tonality, just lighter.

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    The more I look the more questions I have.
    It now appears to me to be a photo of a painting rather than an actual shot of a stairway through a narrow window.
    Could you tell us more about this shot, Guillermo?
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    Re: The Stairs

    It is the often photographed stairs at MoMA in NYC. Not a picture of a painting. Yes, it is shot on film.

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    Ah....I see why they are often photographed.
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    Re: The Stairs

    There is even a Flickr group for the MoMA Stairs !
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    I looked at many of them and saw some nice ones but I like Guillermos's best
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    Re: The Stairs

    Very Nice, I've never heard of this place till now, and the first question I was going to ask was, "Where is this?" and "Where did you take this from?"

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    Re: The Stairs

    Excellent. I love the grain working in this. The minimalist composition, as well as the details such as the position of the person on the stairs is striking. I actually find the washed out areas especially that of the upper left appealing.
    Really well done!
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    Re: The Stairs

    Nice to see a dramatic B & W image. I wonder how the image would look with a little burn in the upper left corner ?
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    Re: The Stairs

    Very nicely done. On my monitor the upper left corner isn't washed out and looks good.

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    Re: The Stairs

    congrats on the sticky, amazing shot!
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    Re: The Stairs

    Fantastic shot.Love the B & W tonal range,grain.Well done.

    Congratulations, Well deserved sticky.

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    Congrats on the sticky.....deserved for sure.
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    Re: The Stairs

    I love this shot! It kind of looks like a drawing but that doesn't bother me. I love the grain, the black and white, the tonal range in the black and whites, and the composition. Not to mention the person in the stairway. Excellent job!

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    Re: The Stairs

    Wonderful image

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    Re: The Stairs

    Looks Great!! I feel the upper left, even if it is washed out is nicely balanced by darkness of the lower left.
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