St Joseph's interior details

[payn817]

Lovin the 5D, low noise at high ISO and fast glass ROCKS!!! I know there is a bit of distortion, but I am not sure it hurts it. What do you fine folks think? Is it effective, or does it SUCK??

[Ronnoco]

I am impressed by the detail, sharpness and overall exposure as well as your composition. The only way you would be able to know whether the distortion hurts or not is to correct it in Photoshop and compare the two.

In terms of minor corrections I would take out some distracting bits of sunlight reflections from under the balcony and elsewhere and very slightly brighten the upper balcony area to bring up a little more detail there. I would also "close" the door in the distance or try to slightly "unclutter" that area. Not as a critique item related to this particular shot but be aware that despite one's personal preference some images work better in colour.

Ronnoco

[walterick]

I agree with Ronnoco's comments about detail, sharpness, and exposure and would add that I love the tones as well. This is a really nice image.

I can't help but think that you have two pictures here. What I really like about this one is the balcony area and the stained glass. I feel like that could be one image by itself. Then the seond image is of the pews and the arched doorway on the bottom half. Play with the scroll bar and you'll see what I mean.

This image works great but I thought I would share my impression of two photos in case it gave you any ideas for the future. Good shooting!

[jar_e]

Definately agree with Rick, you have two strong images here. I love the tones and love black and white. Defiantely a great touch.

Glad to know your enoying the new gear!

[swmdrayfan]

payn, I wouldn't have noticed the nitpicks if someone hadn't pointed them out, but nonetheless I still like it very much.
John

[gahspidy]

Good capture, framing was done well. I'm thinking that an ever so slight bit of color be brought back into this might really enhance an already nice image.Good work

[payn817]

Great thoughts on this one all.

I am posting a color version. It wasn't as colorful as you may think. That may be because to gain detail inside, I had to blow out the windows a tad.

I see the potential for the two shots here, now that it is mentioned. Thanks for that observation walterick.

Ronnoco, I do color too. It really depends on the subject, and I ALWAYS try both versions, this spoke to me more in b&w. Considering your tough standards (no harm intended) I am glad you found it somewhat impressive. It was shot with the kit lens.

John, thanks for the kind words. I didn't notice it either.

Gary, glad to know you find this image somewhat appealing. I posted a color version as well.

Jared, yes the new gear is awesome, and is inspring me to get more serious and shoot more often. Glad you liked the tones.

Thanks again to everyone, and would love to know if you like the color better. It can be reshot pretty much anytime, so perhaps a less busy day would take care of the door and distant areas. It was about 10 minutes until confession, and was starting to fill up

[Overbeyond]

Very Good Payn
My eye is quickly invited down that aisle to the door at the far end.
Tom

[Loupey]

Yes, great shot, Payn!

Technically excellent too - exposure and everything tack sharp. Great sense of depth.

Personally, I like the color version of this one (FWIW).

[OldSchool]

Really nice job Payne. I'm coming in late here on the critique. So, I hope you don't mind if I just pat your back. Also, I prefer the color version. But that may just be me...

Cheers,
Tim

[srobb]

Great shot, payn. Not much to add for me. I do see the possibility of the two different images that Rick suggested. It does not happen often, but this is one that I love both versions of. The sharpnes and detail is awesome.

[Ronnoco]

payn, I wouldn't have noticed the nitpicks if someone hadn't pointed them out, but nonetheless I still like it very much.
John

Ah, that is what photography is: attention to the smallest detail to improve its influence on the impact and effectiveness of the photo.

Ronnoco

[walterick]

I prefer the black and white

[Ronnoco]

Great thoughts on this one all.

Thanks again to everyone, and would love to know if you like the color better. It can be reshot pretty much anytime, so perhaps a less busy day would take care of the door and distant areas. It was about 10 minutes until confession, and was starting to fill up

Oops, I goofed in my communication by being too subtle. I was suggesting that you take care of the door and the clutter through the use of Photoshop, not by actually physically making changes in the environment.

Ronnoco

[payn817]

Wow, I think this is the most response I have gotten. Thanks for all the thoughts on this.

Oldschool - A pat on the back is always welcome