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    Youthful Exhuberance



    How awful is the composition? I know it's cluttered but I can't find a crop that I like.

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    Re: Youthful Exhuberance

    Ah...there's the photo.

    Not too cluttered at all. Nice seperation of the young man's face from everything else as his expression is what stands out. The artwork (small statues?) might be a distraction, cutting into his legs but more important to have captured the moment.

    Possibly a crop to his upper torso to eliminate those distractions? Maybe something like this...though it may not be the message you wanted your photo to have...

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    Last edited by Tuna; 12-10-2004 at 03:22 PM.

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