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    banished Don Schaeffer's Avatar
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    Spider in the Window Frame



    Even the ones
    who say they don't trust
    have sticky insides,

    tear away at risk
    of internal rips. We
    never get away easily.

    This is a planet
    of pull-me push. Sticky
    webs stretch and hold


    They spin through our eyes,
    sticky threads that build homes.
    Please don't despair.

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    Love + Music + Photography = Life CLKunst's Avatar
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    Re: Spider in the Window Frame

    Neat-o Don!!!

    Here is an instance of where the photo is only half of the story!! The personal poetry makes this three times more interesting to me than just the photo itself. The words emphasize the suggestions of the image and vice versa.

    True art comes from the artist not being afraid to wind themselves up into their work and expose a bit of themselves in the process. As a printing suggestion I would wrap this poem around the margins of the image or handwrite it over top of the white in between spaces.
    C.L. Kunst - CLicKs Photography
    Asheville Photographer
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    Re: Spider in the Window Frame

    Thanks CL. I have used that technique in the past when I made paintings. Unfortunatley the poem is very hard to read when you do that.

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