Southbank Graffiti

[jmes10]

These 2 were taken at the same place as the trickster shot, on the river thames. The pieces are constantly changing up there so theres always a different picture to be had.





Comments and critism welcome.
Sorry for posting 2 pics in one post. I thought it would be pointless putting two of the same subject in diff posts

James

[gahspidy]

James, these two images in the same thread is perfectly fine.
The top image I like that you attempted to frame the subject by using the corridor or overhang and to give the viewer the feeling that we are stnding inside with you looking at all the graffiti on these walls. i think the black area of the overhang at the top is too much though and i would crop off about 3/4 of it (the black area)
The bottom image is pretty straight forward but works very well that way in bringing out the emphasis on the word "true" that you wanted to bring attention to. I notice from the last thread"trickster in action" that this word is quite large on the wall and perhaps showing more of the wall in the bg with the word in one corner area of the frame would give reference to the size of the graffiti. Also i think you could tone down the saturation of the colors.
good subjects.