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    The source Taize

    These images are from a place called the Source in Taize France, I can't help but feel i didn't do the reality justice. no altering. any suggestions?
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    Last edited by Skyman; 09-07-2005 at 11:36 PM. Reason: Typo's

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    Re: The source Taize

    Hi Skyman,

    I like the first one a lot. It is artistically pleasing and technically well exposed. My only nit is that it may be a little tilted to the left (not sure). Also, a post processing suggestion (for the digital darkroom) would be to bring out a little more shadow detail.

    The second shot is a nice attempt, but for me loses the subject focus (the desire to run off that plank and jumping into the water). It is also over exposed in that sky details are lost.

    Very good submissions...
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    Tim
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