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    soup line

    My Auto Focus didn't so I did some filters. What do you think.
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    Re: soup line

    Quote Originally Posted by freygr
    My Auto Focus didn't so I did some filters. What do you think.

    Hello Freygr,

    I am not sure here. I like your composition and I actually like the texture that you have achieved with the filters but I feel that it lacks sharpness. Simply put, I don't think that the filters cover for the focusing issue although I like the look you were going for. The same scene properly focused would work for me.

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    Re: soup line

    I am very much with Seb on this.
    It just seems to be over compensated for, so it just doesn't work.
    It is hard to tell that there are birds here, they kind of blend together.
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    Re: soup line

    Thank You, both I was afraid it would not work.
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    Re: soup line

    I agree with the others. It's an expt. I think overall however that it wasn't successful. It seems to obscure the information in a situation where it wasnt really necessary. Of course you never know unless you try these expts and get feedback,so I think the expt was worth making.

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