Something caught his eye

[starriderrick]

As I stepped aside to let the rider pass...he stopped. Your thoughts welcomed.Thanks.

Rick

[TracerNH]

I like the lower 2/3's of this image. The railing and the shadow of the railing draw the attention to the rider. The bridge supports also keep your eye in the frame and the rider appears lost in thought. When I view this image cropped from the top to about an inch of the rider’s head, the composition is stronger for me.

I wish the light was softer.

Chris

[DLB1973]

I agree on the tighter crop of 2/3rds from bottom up. As a bike rider myself I like the concept, and have sat on many bridges while taking a break.
db

[starriderrick]

Thank you for the constructive feedback. I appreciate it.

Rick

[Dan001]

did you check to see what he was looking at? great shot anyway

[PRB]

Tracer said it all for me. Give it that crop and that's "the shot."

My Best to You,
Penny

[starriderrick]

Thanks again.Yes, I stopped to look myself...A slow running stream.Very tranquil.

With regards,
Rick

[Don Schaeffer]

I think the color is distracting. Did you try this in blackand white?

[starriderrick]

How's this look?

Rick