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    Seb
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    Some more night work

    Comments are welcome.

    Seb
    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:45 PM.

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    Re: Some more night work

    Seb, I like the lighting and exposure of the background very much. The subject face is lit up a bit too harshly, and perhaps he is too far away from the camera in the shot. I would like to see some of the dark fg cropped away. I like the overall ambience of this scene but wish for something more interesting going on with the subject.
    btw, great to see you on the forum again. . .I know your time is very limited lately.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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    Re: Some more night work

    I think the lighting is excellent apart from the subjects face, which is possibly to washed out! Though the house/barn is interesting, this shot doesnt really do all that much for me!! Though that is probably my amateur eyes!!

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    Seb
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    Re: Some more night work

    Thanks guys,

    That's a work in progress, I too think that my model face is washed out (well actually I don't think so, I see it.... lol). I'll see how I manage lighting for the shots to come.

    Seb

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