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Thread: Snail on Rock

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    Firefighter Tyson L. Sparks's Avatar
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    Snail on Rock

    I tried some color and stuff, I think I blew it! What do you think.



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    Re: Snail on Rock

    Tyson, i like the picture with the amount of sky and strong cloud formations filling it. Something more identifyable in the fg would help. I'm not sure what you were trying for with your post processing. It looks like you were erasing the color and then got interupted with a phone call in the middle. Not being sarcastic, just trying a little light humour.
    I think if you want to try a desaturated look, create a duplicate copy, convert that to b&w, and then fade it's opacity to allow some color back. In addition, you could use the eraser brush( my favorite tool) to reveal more color in select areas.
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    Re: Snail on Rock

    I don't see a snail.
    I'm not expert enough to know what to do with it but what's that in left center just above the tree line?
    Might want to get rid of it..
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    Re: Snail on Rock

    What's that red structure near the bottom? I'd say that looks like it might be worth investigating on its own.

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    Re: Snail on Rock

    Well there is a tower on the left, and the red thing is a Oil Storage tank. Theres the phone again.LOL

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