Smokin' hot

[veggie]

Looking for C&C on this one

[freygr]

It looks to me under exposed to me. I edited your photo the top is unedited the bottom was adjusted in thumb plus, saturation +5 to offset the contrast adjustment of -7, and lightness was adjusted +66. You subject also needed a full flash or a light reflector as her face is in the shadow.

Other an the technical I do like the composition, but myself would of framed it in the portrait origination.

[swmdrayfan]

frey's right......definately need some flash here. Maybe a little fill from the girl's left?
John

[veggie]

Thanks, it is much better. Sometimes it is hard to see on a laptop.

I do like her left dark though, I think it is what makes the mood, and the bride smokin' it has to be dark

[freygr]

Thanks, it is much better. Sometimes it is hard to see on a laptop.

I do like her left dark though, I think it is what makes the mood, and the bride smokin' it has to be dark

I do agree but it still needs a little more light. A reflector may do the trick as you can see the affects and get it just right, as I feel there is too much shadow on her face.