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Thread: Smoke House

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    Smoke House

    I took this in August, at a ballpark Fire & Safety night. The fire dept. had a trailer set up with a 'smoke' room, for demonstrating how to evacuate a home in case of smoke and fire. The youngster on the left was being shown how to evacuate. Unfortunately in this shot the reflection of the stadium lights in the closed window takes up a portion of the fireman's shirt, so I'm aware of that problem. On the left side of the window frame the smoke makes the shot appear hazy, so that's not a problem. Does the center post of the window frame ruin this?
    Your thoughts?
    John

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    Re: Smoke House

    It made me think it was two pictures at first.

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    Re: Smoke House

    Decent shot. It does look like 2 pix. I wish that the adult's arm would more into the left side however. That would have really created a transition!
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