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    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
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    slow explorer

    While waiting for the rally cars to pass, I found this little fella exploring after a rain shower.
    Is there too much OOF here ?
    Crop from the left or from the right?
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    Re: slow explorer

    Good catch. Between the out of focus areas and the tilted composition, I find it a little hard to focus on the speed racer. Maybe a tilt and crop?

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    Re: slow explorer

    Hmm. I was horizontal, the tree was tilted, I don't think every shot should be horizontal or vertical.
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    Re: slow explorer

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat View Post
    Hmm. I was horizontal, the tree was tilted, I don't think every shot should be horizontal or vertical.
    I'm not saying that; I'm saying that it is confusing for me as is, I tilt my head looking for the right angle to view it and end up losing interest. A tilt and crop might help the viewer.

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    Re: slow explorer

    OK, how much tilt ?
    Show me your crop, please.
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    Re: slow explorer

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat View Post
    OK, how much tilt ?
    Show me your crop, please.
    Here's my best effort. I'm not sure that I love it, but it may give you an idea or two...
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