Sleepy

[plchung]

Hi all,

I'm testing my new 15mm lens and would like to have your valuable comments.

Many thanks and happy new year,

Alex

[readingr]

Hi,

I quite like the colours in this photo - couldn't you have got the chap on the right to sleep as well? This would have made a much better picture.

My feeling is that a tighter crop around the people sleeping people would give a better photo and also limit the amout of light from the windows of the bus

[Words]

hi,

interesting composition,

i agree with the tighter crop statement (just left hand side in my opinion, leaving the guy on the right where he is) and a slight realignment and it will be a nice image

hows festival place these days roger?

[plchung]

Hi Words and Roger,

Is it better? I couldn't get him sleep because he is not our man. And I decided to get him in the picture as I see he looked nervious when I start holding my cam and thought this would be an interesting contrast with friends sleeping.

Thanks for your comments.

Cheers,

Alex

[Words]

i think you should leave the guy in (on the right) and chop the top of the head of "the sleeper" off, i would crop to the glassed

[plchung]

Oh yeah, so how about this one?

thanks.

alex

[Words]

yeah a bit tighter on the left and it will be sorted