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I agree with LL. The small version presented here does not do this justice. Also, did you shoot this in color and convert? If so, present the color version. I think it would be kick.
The color version is more effective. The blue stands out and convinces the viewer it is indeed a reflection while the B/W version has ambiguity and is kinda dark.
There are lots of things to like about this one, the color one that is.
You have the darkness in the big shape against the lightness of the background.
And the interesting textures of the clouds plus the textures of them in the relection.
I also like how the lines in the window create a good compostion too.
Good Stuff!!
Brian
“A great photograph is one that fully expresses what one feels, in the deepest sense, about what is being photographed, and is, thereby, a true manifestation of what one feels about life in its entirety...” - Ansel Adams