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    sky

    nice cloud formation and sunburst


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    Re: sky

    I like the sunburst part but think there is too much empty dark space.
    Can probably crop a lot from the right, some from the left and maybe some from the bottom. Can't decide exactly where the crops should be but play around with them and see what you like.
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    Re: sky

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    I like the sunburst part but think there is too much empty dark space.
    Can probably crop a lot from the right, some from the left and maybe some from the bottom. Can't decide exactly where the crops should be but play around with them and see what you like.
    I largely agree with Frog.

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    Re: sky

    I wouldn't crop it, it loses the impact of he wide sky.
    It is spectacular, but I think it needs a little detail in the blacks.
    Not much, but some barely visible (90% or 95% black) detail will make this.
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    Re: sky

    I think it would be better in colored. It’s too dark but I like how the light bursted!
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    Re: sky

    I think Frog said it all....
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    Re: sky

    +1 for Frog's comments.

    How did the color shot look?

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    Re: sky

    Interesting WA capture.I think a color version would be a plus.

    SmartWombat,
    I like your comments.The wide sky is the strength.Your critique provides excellent ideas to fine tune this B/W. Thanks.

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