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Sorry Walter, it doesn't do anything for me. I like how you caught the guy with both feet off the ground, but other than that there's no real focal point, and I don't like how every major object in the picture has some part of it severed. I'm sorry.
Drink Coffee. Do stupid things faster with more energy.
Love the Colours and the pop art type theme. This would go down well with the youngsters - all you need now is some brand names to pull them in and I would say loads of money from advertising
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
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I somewhat agree with Kelly. It doesn't do much for me either. I did happen to look in your gallery, and i must say that you really have an eye for photography. You have a knack for knowing how to capture the moment and your photographs show it. Impressive stuff in your gallery, but this one doesn't do much for me.
Mando
"The aim of art is to represent not the outward appearance of things, but their inward significance." Aristotle
"What the mass media offers is not popular art, but entertainment which is intended to be consumed like food, forgotten, and replaced by a new dish." W. H. Auden
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