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Don.....looks like it could have been a popular spot at one time. I like these. That bit of oversaturating in the bottom shot, I find kind of appealing.
John
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I really like the popping colours in the second one! The building really stands out as does the graffiti.
Maybe too much sky? I don't think it matters as there is something there that holds my interest.
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Thanks guys. Sorry Frog. I was playing with the histogram controls. I think it was the top limit control (which limits the range of colors I think). When I reached a certain point I said Yooooreekaaaa. It seemed much too routine before I took it out of this world.
I think the first one works. It's tilted but that sort of adds to the run down feeling. The bottom doesn't work for me. The building seems tilted cw, it's centered, artifacts around the rims of the objects .. etc. Technical problems.
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Very well done on both. Love the saturation and deep blues of both, great lines/patterns and pseudo-symmetry in #1, awesome depth of #2.
Awesome shots, gives the feeling between the nostalgia of an old waterpark and good times and the B-Movie "terror" that a whacked-out filmmaker would undoubtedly love.