Siona's Orangepeel Sun #2

[Don Schaeffer]

Siona's Orangepeel Sun

Looking for pretty things
and surrounded
in the shop and on the walls
put up with joy
as numerous as smiles
casual as tea.

All of our busy hands
and talkative hearts
buy the pretty things
and make them
like galaxies rising
out of the dark.

[GB1]

I think I like the direct down angle a little more, Don, though this one does seem sharper. As for the poetry .. I'm a visual guy, so can't comment.

[Don Schaeffer]

thank you GB