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    Silhouetted city

    ...Or part of it. Vancouver, B.C., Canada.

    Attachment 65410
    Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ7K
    Other equipment: Hood adapter, Tiffen UV Haze-1 filter.
    Shutter-speed: 1/1300 second
    Aperture: F8.0, smallest possible
    ISO: 80
    Focal length (lens): 10.1mm
    Focal length (35mm equivalent): 73mm


    Feedback/suggestions are greatly appreciated. Don't be afraid to post negative comments!

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    Re: Silhouetted city

    Those are some seriously powerful clouds for not having a circular polarizer listed in the equipment data! Composition works well, building from the low left to the high right, but it seems slightly over-sharpened.

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    Re: Silhouetted city

    I see a lot of posterization in the top left cloud. The building silhouettes work well with the very dramatic sky. I wish I could see more detail in the water to help separate the water from the buildings.

    Chris

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    Re: Silhouetted city

    Thanks guys for the feedback.

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    Re: Silhouetted city

    For me the main perspectives are the clouds and silhouette, the slight glimmer on the water is distracting for me, you either need more or to lose it altogether. Good eye for seeing this shot. S
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    Re: Silhouetted city

    Thanks very much, shootme. I'll try to clone out the water glimmers.

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