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Do you have a similar shot with just the three boats? I think it would be a strong image with the trio of boats making a triangle against the rectangles of the water/sky. I kinda feel like the person is blocking my view. At the same time I really like this image with the person there and I think it's definitely a keeper.
I like the color, I mostly like the composition (although I might like to see a bit more of the model in the frame) but I bet it would work better if you shot from a lower position to get more of that woman in and place the horizon lower in the frame.
I feel the sky is just to blue. I also think you could crop about half the sky out and make the horizon less centered. I see enough detail in the model that I think that part of it works. I like it though. Nice work
Greg
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