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    Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day


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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    Too dark, and I think it's zoomed too far in, or cropped. Looking at it now looks like it was made in 3D max or a cgi program (No offence if that came out wrong). Though I do like the reflection on the grey part.
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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    what is up with the bubbly line? why the gray?

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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    I brightened and increased the contrast of the reflection on the skylight glass.

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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    Hi Don!

    This one has some interesting elements. I like the blues in contrast with the whites and shapes from the panes of the windows but as far as a subject there really isn't too much to hold you beyond the first look over. Do you ever feel like you get a great texture or color contrast but there's nothing else really there? I do. I find it mentally therapeutic to just take the picture and move on with my life good or bad but I wonder how anyone else feels about that. May I have permission to alter your image I would like to try something with it. I will post the results in this thread if you like, and I will be happy to destroy it when I'm done; just sort of following through on my therapy kind of a thing. :crazy: :lol: ut:

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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    You have any permission you like, CL. I have no vested interest in what I did here.

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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    The grey part seems kinda ghostly, zombie-esque -- like you can alsmost discern people there.

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    Re: Shopping Mall Skylight on a Dark Day

    Thanks for the play time Don. I really liked the colors, contrasts and shapes in this one. But I think this radiant turned out a little too symmetrical even for me. Could be neat as a wallpaper tile though for a monitor. It's just an interesting thing to try and can be fun to do with different images from time to time. Thanks!

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