ship at the beach

[veggie]

Hello!

We spend a weekend in Charleston, and in the morning we would see these huge container ships coming and going. Could not resist the picture.

C&C very welcome

[ZL4life]

it might help if everything wasn't so centered. Maybe if you moved about 10 feet to the left, you could get the girls on the right and the ship on the left..... i don't know

[swmdrayfan]

Jo,
Love this because it has so many possibilities. I'm in agreement with ZL though. I'd give it more room on the left as the container ship has to have somewhere to go. Other than that, I like it very much.
John

[Tyson L. Sparks]

I agree the ship needs some room to move but I like the kids in the middle.

[veggie]

Thanks for the critique, it really helps!
I can see what you are saying now that I look again. Next time I'll take my time more. I think that seems to be my problem, I go tooo fast (story of my life!)

Here is the other reason I did not get to take more space on the left....(little models :mad2: )

[Greg McCary]

I disagree I think the composition is pretty good. I might would crop just slightly more of the left side and try and bring out more color, But I like it. This is a good one for the family album.
Greg