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    Shed Artwork

    I like the colourful artwork painted on this shed..

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    Re: Shed Artwork

    So do I. Very colorful and a nice catch for photography. I'm not sure I like seeing the brick at the bottom, but it might be OK if you showed even more of it.

    Do you have any more shots of the shed, like a straight-one shot? Seems like there's a lot of additional possibilities here, such as the meter (?) next to the door, the window and surrounding rim, etc.

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    Re: Shed Artwork

    Yes, very nice and colorful. I agree with the bricks.

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    Re: Shed Artwork

    Quote Originally Posted by yogestee
    I like the colourful artwork painted on this shed..

    Canon 350D/Sigma 18-200mm
    250th@f11
    200ISO

    Jurgen
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    I like the shed but the compostion doesn''t works for me. I think that it either calls for:
    1) A wider scene where the shed is part of a cityscape or....
    2) More likely, close ups with specific details of the shed

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    Re: Shed Artwork

    I would crop out the brick at the bottom and lighten the shadow areas at the top.

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