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    She only has eyes for him

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    Re: She only has eyes for him

    I like the eye contact between them. The foreground is too blurry, I'd crop it out.
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    Re: She only has eyes for him

    Thanks GB. Would you suggest cropping all of the foreground or just some of it? I sort of liked that you knew what they were doing otherwise it just looks like she's looking at him. Is this any better?

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    Re: She only has eyes for him

    Better. It works well like that. Would be a good Xmas shot if there was a tree in the background too! GB
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    Re: She only has eyes for him

    Hi Glycerin19,,,,cute pic....The cropped version is definitely better...Skins tones are good as is the exposure...The mantle piece in the background is a bit distracting though..

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    Re: She only has eyes for him

    Thank you GB and Jurgen. I appreciate the help on the cropping. I might try to reshoot with a less distracting background but it all depends on the willingness of the baby Thank you again!
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