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Thread: Shake It Off!

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    Shake It Off!

    I would appreciate any help to improve this photo. the first is the original frame, the second is after cropping, smudge, clone tools & noise ninja. All with limited skill. Also color variations to get sepia tone.
    All help suggestions welcome. pse2 software.
    Thanks,
    Mark.
    Last edited by mdmc; 04-10-2007 at 02:42 AM.

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    Re: Shake It Off!

    Mark,

    I'd pick the second one, but the only problem I have with it is you lose definition of the fur and the snow on the underbody of the dog. Other then that nice action shot,

    Jared

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    Re: Shake It Off!

    I like first shot with the dog in context, sepia seems a tad too warm for considering the snow. Nice soft image.

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    Re: Shake It Off!

    I like the first original version far better. As Laurie said having the dog in context and the fence is interesting and visually pleasing. I would only crop a bit off the left to get the dog out of center.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Shake It Off!

    Jared, Laurie, Gary,
    Thank you for taking the time to look and to post, and thanks for the suggestions!
    I'll keep this one as a work in progress. I'll try and get a little more detail in the snow and on the fence and see what happens.
    Mark.

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